Tuesday, June 7, 2011

The Shocker (Entry 10)

This post has been removed for the novel's debut in April, 2012 . . .


    Elisa isn't your regular nerd.  She's not the kind of person who quotes Monty Python, or has a periodic table tattooed on her butt.  No she's a different sort altogether.  She carries a duct-taped Bible everywhere, wears bright-orange polyester pants, and dyes her hair with red kool-aid.
    Even though she tries slipping by apart from the crowds, it doesn't help that her best friend happens to be "The Boarder," one of the cutest and most popular boys in school.  He's not willing to let her go unnoticed—not until she goes to the homecoming dance with another guy.
   "The Boarder" starts acting weird after the date goes well, and Elisa begins wondering if he's only been looking at her as a friend or maybe something more.  She must choose between her best friend and "The Bad Boy," but will she make the right choice?


  1. Can we get a visual of this man candy?!? Your description has gotten me intrigued... =)

  2. Gee I recognize that name from somewhere :-)

  3. Cade will kill me when he reads this--I can't wait *giggles!*

    I'll see if I can dig up a picture from back then :) I think I have one somewhere.

  4. He looks like a more masculine version of Johnny Depp. In fact in the if you put more rugged features on Johnny Depp in the Tourist movie and lighter hair that would be what Cade looked like when I first met him. lol Man Candy! Oh he's gonna love that discription. Well he better. that's a hell of a compliment.

  5. I have esp, yes I do because I knew what was coming. Ha ha, I have been waiting for this and to think I got it in readable size! I couldn't be more happy now, finally "Man Candy" Prince charming dashes in to save the day. Poddle girl never stood a chance. Still wondering about those vamps though...

  6. Love at first sight! Isnt it amazing. Reading this made me think of the first time I met my husband, only it was my cousin, not an aquaintence, that had the hots for him.

  7. Melynda,
    Cade is going to get such a big head LOL!!!!

    You know me so well now.
    I LOVE the font bigger--Thanks for the great feedback on that. ;)

    OH my gosh! Sooo funny. The good ones always have mulitple girls going after them :0)

  8. Yay Go Elisa Girl and show that Poodle. Great stuff :O)

  9. Elizabeth--this is my first read on your blog and I gotta say...I LOVE it :) I'm off now to read the back stories!

  10. How fun! I love your description of him even more knowing that you married him! You go girl!