Saturday, June 11, 2011

The Cave of Wonder (Entry 12)

This post has been removed for the novel's debut in April, 2012 . . .


    Elisa isn't your regular nerd.  She's not the kind of person who quotes Monty Python, or has a periodic table tattooed on her butt.  No she's a different sort altogether.  She carries a duct-taped Bible everywhere, wears bright-orange polyester pants, and dyes her hair with red kool-aid.
    Even though she tries slipping by apart from the crowds, it doesn't help that her best friend happens to be "The Boarder," one of the cutest and most popular boys in school.  He's not willing to let her go unnoticed—not until she goes to the homecoming dance with another guy.
   "The Boarder" starts acting weird after the date goes well, and Elisa begins wondering if he's only been looking at her as a friend or maybe something more.  She must choose between her best friend and "The Bad Boy," but will she make the right choice?


  1. I feel like I'm reading the beginning of a porno. You're so descriptive, and it leads the mind to wander... :)

  2. LOL!!!!! Bow chick a wow wow :0) Hopefully it's just not one of those incerdibly cheesy, bad pornos *giggles*

  3. 10 years later and the secrets revealed. "so thats what u were thinking about." lol =P

  4. lol Bad Boy? So that title you'll take but man candy is taboo? You two crack me up! No worries Alicia she won't take this to naughty land. I know her too well.
    Nicely done my friend.

  5. You guys say what you want, I just want to know who kissed who first :) Wish you would hurry up, all this waiting is killing me! First kiss in a dark cave would have been perfect. Love the painting, who did it? Staying tuned for another episode of The bad boy jerk meets bible girl :)

  6. This is better than Jane Eyre!
    One of my favorite posts to date

  7. So, when does the book come out? Yes, this one! I will be the first one to purchase it!

  8. I think I need to go take a cold shower now...