Sunday, June 5, 2011

Lost (Entry 8)

This post has been removed for the novel's debut in April, 2012 . . .

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    Elisa isn't your regular nerd.  She's not the kind of person who quotes Monty Python, or has a periodic table tattooed on her butt.  No she's a different sort altogether.  She carries a duct-taped Bible everywhere, wears bright-orange polyester pants, and dyes her hair with red kool-aid.
    Even though she tries slipping by apart from the crowds, it doesn't help that her best friend happens to be "The Boarder," one of the cutest and most popular boys in school.  He's not willing to let her go unnoticed—not until she goes to the homecoming dance with another guy.
   "The Boarder" starts acting weird after the date goes well, and Elisa begins wondering if he's only been looking at her as a friend or maybe something more.  She must choose between her best friend and "The Bad Boy," but will she make the right choice?

10 comments:

  1. Lap tops can be a pisn, just lost the whole post i wrote you....Oh well, I mentioned pain in the butt hormones and teen age years and how I would have kissed that boarder :)Chihushua...lol, can't even spell it. My sister has two and they are mean dogs let me tell you! Not missing out there!

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  2. Colorado is awesome, but I'd love to see Utah!

    Hey, thanks for stopping by my blog today. I am following you, however one thing I noticed, unless my computer had a glitch, your blog URL is NOT in your profile (via the thumbnail image when you comment on a blog) you should include it so we can all follow along :) Also supporting you on FB and Twitter :)

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  3. I'm glad I wasn't missing out with the chihuahua LOL!

    Ally,
    Thanks for letting me know. I think I fixed it. :) Oh and thanks for checking out my blog.

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  4. What an intense revelation. The pain was so well expressed, and tangible. The chihuahua balanced the bikers nicely; they are probably accountants during the week, and do the Harley thing on weekends.

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  5. Chihuahuas are the best dogs ever.I have two and I don't know what I would do without them. They're truly one owner's dogs. Okay, not back to the story. I just don't get why you couldn't fall for the Boarder. Did Yellow actually tell you she liked him? He sounds like such a good catch...Ahh, nothing like teenage angst.

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  6. Yellow never actually told me and still, to this day, I don't know if she really liked him or not. Crazy, huh.

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  7. You could totally pull off a Harley. (If you get one because of this comment I get to ride shot gun) You're writing is getting better and better.

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  8. I'm so glad I finally have the time to catch up on your stories! On to the next one...I can't wait!

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  9. hey elisa im new here & luving ur novel....cant wait 2 devour d rest of it. visit me at desigirl28.blogspot.com

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