Sunday, May 29, 2011

The Date (Entry 5)

This post has been removed for the novel's debut in April, 2012 . . .

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    Elisa isn't your regular nerd.  She's not the kind of person who quotes Monty Python, or has a periodic table tattooed on her butt.  No she's a different sort altogether.  She carries a duct-taped Bible everywhere, wears bright-orange polyester pants, and dyes her hair with red kool-aid.
    Even though she tries slipping by apart from the crowds, it doesn't help that her best friend happens to be "The Boarder," one of the cutest and most popular boys in school.  He's not willing to let her go unnoticed—not until she goes to the homecoming dance with another guy.
   "The Boarder" starts acting weird after the date goes well, and Elisa begins wondering if he's only been looking at her as a friend or maybe something more.  She must choose between her best friend and "The Bad Boy," but will she make the right choice?

5 comments:

  1. Love you hairdo :) First loves....awww, never do seem to turn out right. I could really feel the tension through your words and I want to find out if you talked to the boarder, hope you are not going to leave us hanging!

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  2. I heard the Indiana Jones song in my mind as I read this you little dare devil. haha. You looked so pretty in that picutre, oddly enough you look exactly like you do now exept for the curls.

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  3. At least you didn't have to keep your promise, since he wasn't honest with you. So, what happened with the boarder? I really like the fact that all the characters in your stories have meaningful names, good job.

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  4. WHAT AN AMAZING PICTURE!!

    I LOVE THE COLORS AND LIGHT....

    You looked really pretty.

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