Thursday, June 16, 2011

Halloween (Entry 14)

This post has been removed for the novel's debut in April, 2012 . . .


    Elisa isn't your regular nerd.  She's not the kind of person who quotes Monty Python, or has a periodic table tattooed on her butt.  No she's a different sort altogether.  She carries a duct-taped Bible everywhere, wears bright-orange polyester pants, and dyes her hair with red kool-aid.
    Even though she tries slipping by apart from the crowds, it doesn't help that her best friend happens to be "The Boarder," one of the cutest and most popular boys in school.  He's not willing to let her go unnoticed—not until she goes to the homecoming dance with another guy.
   "The Boarder" starts acting weird after the date goes well, and Elisa begins wondering if he's only been looking at her as a friend or maybe something more.  She must choose between her best friend and "The Bad Boy," but will she make the right choice?


  1. Oh my gosh! That is like something out of a movie! Love it. Gotta run, work calls!
    Have a wonderful day!

  2. MY COMPUTER IS ACTING UP>>LOVE THE POST>Cade is your knight in goth gear. Great post.

  3. "He slithered toward the door, moving faster and faster, like a double-jointed pansy." best line!

    First off, the post had me in chills almost the whole time.

    Secondly, being who I am, do I know this other goth person your knight in shining armor came in with?

    Fabulous job, I absolutely love reading your writing.

  4. Great site and posts! Can't believe you can post everyday!

  5. LOL! Thanks :)

    Oh and Leetah, this is someone different than you're thinking of. I think I'll write about that other person in a couple entries from now.

  6. What a great post...You really have a gift!

  7. Keeping me on the edge of my seat as usual!

  8. Seriously one of your best post..Nicely done. I felt every word of it..

  9. lol i was dressed up as "The Crow" for halloween.